LATE
Two years have passed and still there is no trace of him. Even today I wait for him to return. Living in the outskirts, I hardly have any visitors. I have only one friend with whom I share everything. Sitting on the couch for about, I don’t exactly remember, how many hours, I keep staring at the door. Even the tea in the cup has become cold.
“You still believe he will return?” my friend asked.
“He promised,” I replied instantly.
“The war has ended two years ago,” she added after a long pause.
“But he promised.”
His absence has stolen the colours of my life. Without him around I don’t even feel like changing. Now it seems like I’m wearing this same dress for years. I don’t even feel like loitering anymore. I just wait for him on that old couch with a cup of cold tea.
The silence of our conversation was broken by the sound of the unlocking entrance gate.
“Did you hear that?”
“Maybe it’s him,” I replied. “Who else can it be?”
“I hear a girl’s voice though.”
It was a girl’s voice indeed.
Without answering I waited for the door to open. Not a lash did fall. Finally the door, which was shut for the past two years, opened. A beautiful lady dressed like a bride entered the room. My eyes searched for him.
“Honey, this place is just perfect!” she exclaimed. “Can I check the rooms upstairs?”
“Yes sure,” came a familiar voice from outside.
“It’s him,” I whispered.
“Who’s she?”
As the lady made her way to the room upstairs, a handsome figure entered the room.
“His wife I suppose,” I murmured.
He lifted me up and stared at me the way I stared at the door for the past two years.
“How I wish we could stay together forever,” he sighed.
Leaving me behind, he made his way upstairs and found his lady shocked and terrified with tears. I knew what had happened. I couldn’t wait for him so long. They discovered my body which was still hanging from the ceiling fan.
I have so much to tell him but it is too late by now. After all I’m just a photograph and my friend, a silent frame.
By Payal Dutta
PC: royalty free images from pexels
Wow.
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Shocking
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Thank you so much for reading me 💖💖 your moon post gave me an idea for my next story. Thank you so much 🤗🤗
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I enjoyed it and glad it helped give you an idea. Together we are one.
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I love that line together we are one 💖💖💖 stole my heart there
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Nice and touching story 😀. Happy blogging!
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Yeah sure 😊..
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Damn! the twist. Wonderful read Payal. Keep it up 🙂
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Ur writeups are amazing
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Welcome and thanks too ❤
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Really beautiful writing. If only I could write such a moving story as you.
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Thank you so much 💕💕 I’m sure you write better than me 🍫🍫 waiting to read you 🤗🤗
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Just amazing stuff Payal !!
Beautiful
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Unmelted chocolate 🍫🍫 kept in the freezer this time 😝😝
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Hehehe 😁 😁 😁
Good one
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Well I hope you do 😊 I’ll be back!
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Yes I read everyone 🤗🤗 happy posting. 💕
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The ending was unexpected. Brilliant sketch. 🙇♂️
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Thank you so much 💖 glad you liked it 🍫🍫🤗
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Very deep and beautiful… We all end being memories trapped between frames… Worth the waiting!! Thanks for sharing, keep it up!!
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Your comment made my day 💖💖💖 thank you so much 💕💕 glad you liked it and I hope I can keep up to your expectations always 🤗🍫
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I know you can and you will
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Well now this made my years 💕💕 thank you so much for believing in me 💖💖
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You are a very talented writer that’s why I do believe… Thank you for the story, you made my day indeed
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Showers of chocolates for you 🍫🍬🌸🍬🍫🤗🤗
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This is really awesome.
I love it.😍😍
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Thank you so much for reading and encouraging me 💕💕 glad to know you loved it. Means a lot to me. 🤗🤗
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This was amazing. I was not expecting the twist of events… just wow ❤️
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Thank you so much 💖💖 I’m so sorry for replying so late 🍫🍫🍫
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This touched my heart. You write so beautifully! Keep it up! 🙂
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Thank you so much. 💖💖 Waiting to read you too 🤗🤗 have a great day 🍫🍫
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Good one. Can be converted into a short movie
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Thank you so much 💕💕 I’ll be the heroine 🙈🙈
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😝😝😝😝good joke
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The ghost I mean 😂😂 the lazy one hanging from the ceiling fan 🙈
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Good one.
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Go To War For Love ♥️
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Love is everywhere 💕💕 thank you so much for reading and showering love 💖💖🍫🍫
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Thank you, so much for liking my hissacredheart1 posts , and your post are more than good. You’re a great writer. I like your style. Keep up the good work.
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Welcome 💖💖 I was going through your posts. Your site title drew my attention 🙂
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Wow. This is very powerful. You are an amazing writer!
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Thank you so much for your valuable comment 💖💖 glad you liked it 🌸 chocolates for you 🍫🍫
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Thanks and bye
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That was so unexpected. You are an awesome writer!! (claps)(claps).. still haven’t figured out emoticons
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Hahaha. 😂😂 No emoticon is better than claps claps
Thank you so much 💖💖🍫🍫
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So touchy ❤
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Thank you so much ma’am ♥🍫
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Nice blog
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Thank you so much 💖💖 glad you liked it and thank you so much for reading me 🍫🍫🍫
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Boom! What an end!
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I’m so happy you enjoyed reading it 💖💖 these comments make my day 💕 thank you so much 💖🍫🤗
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See the movie Tomorrow Is Forever with Claudette Colbert and Orson Welles.
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Okay I will 💖💖 thank you so much for stopping by and reading me 💕 have a great day 🍫🍫🤗🤗
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That was outstanding. Reminds me of Faulkner’s “A Rose for Emily.”
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Well I didn’t read that 💖 now I certainly will. Thank you so much for stopping by 🤗🤗 glad you liked it 🌸🍫
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To confess, I’ve never actually read the entire “Rose for Emily” short story but listened to a podcast that discussed it at great length!
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Fantastic short story. I’m going to go read it again . . ..
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Thank you so much 💖💖💖 glad you liked it 🤗 your comment made my day 💕 have a great day and enjoy having chocolates 🍫🍫
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Payal, you young beauty, your short pieces are wonderful writing, refreshingly honest.
P.S. for increasing my readership by 100%!
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Cute Twilight Zone type tale. I like the reveal at the end. Small suggestion; Maybe you could workshop the endings build up though, make what’s happening a little clearer to the reader? I never finish tinkering with my Tales. Cheers
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Thank you so much for reading me. 💕
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I hate photographer’s, it doesn’t change with time as people in it changes…
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Depends from person to person. I love photographs 💖💖
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Yaa, it depends on person, a good way to remember beautiful moments once had with them even though if they changed
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Nothing changes unless we think they changed 💖💖
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Or it’s just priorities…
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You write so so good Payel ❤
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Thank you so much for stopping by and reading me 💖💖💖 chocolates for you 🤗🤗
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Hahaha will be waiting for them !
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I’ll be waiting for your posts too 🍫🍫🍫🍫
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Wonderful story, Payal.
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Thank you so much for reading me 🤗🤗 chocolates 🍫🍫🍫
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Do check out the content on my page as well. You might find some interesting short series. And if you do, don’t forget to share your reviews with me. 😊
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Certainly I will 💖💖
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Very nice…. amazing stuff 👌
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Thank you so much 🍫🍫🍫 you are always so supportive 💖💖
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OMG didn’t expect the end ….
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Thank you so much for reading and supporting me 💕💕 have a good day 💖
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You too…
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A twist in the tale, love the way you write
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Thank you so much 🤗🤗 glad you liked it and have a good day 🍫🍫
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Felt that. Beautifully Designed 😊
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Thank you so much for reading me 💖💖
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Always would love to😍
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You are quite the story teller. Once again I was surprised by the ending.
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🙈🙈🙈🙈 *blush blush*
Thank you so much once again 💖
More Chocolates for you 🍫🍫🍫
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Yum, I love chocolates! Thanks!
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Wow that’s dark!
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Thank you so much 💖💖 this Comment brought light 🤗🤗
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You’re sweet 😊
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🙈🙈🙈🙈 oh. Thanks 🙈🤗
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🙈
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Involving. Moving. Unsettling. Touching.
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Thank you so much for reading me 💖 💖 so much praise in one post! Blush blush 🙈🙈
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Woooow..this is so sad and touching! Great post girl. You can touch people’s heart.
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Thank you so much 💕💕💕 glad you liked it 🌸 chocolates for you 💖
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It got me warm, and loving and excited and much more… Best wishes and keep up the superb writing
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Thank you so much for reading me 💖 💖 glad you liked it 🌸 chocolates for you 🍫
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Amazing. The end …
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I’m in tears rn. You made it look so beautiful.
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This is an amazing post. Evoked emotions I did not know I had.
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